Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
Wednesday, July 16, 2008

A Woman Forty Plus Aspires Comments

Rating: 4.7

I must be the centre of attention
And reaffirm my desirability.
I must feel validated as a woman
And re-experience the romance of love.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar
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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 29 April 2018

Aspirations of a woman is explained. Beautiful thoughts

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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2018

Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband................Great thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2017

A superb creation! The inner urge of a woman after forty has been narrated in philosophical parlance. Great work!

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Rajnish Manga 11 June 2017

The psychology of a married woman in her mid forties has been nicely interpreted. Thanks.

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Upendra Upm 18 May 2017

very bold and incisive, so confidently articulating on subjects most of us will fumble.Let be burnt the ennui of monogamy. Brilliant poem.

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Toluwanimi Ibikunle 08 July 2016

nice work sir. I love the way you put so much emotions into one piece.

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Toluwanimi Ibikunle 08 July 2016

so much emotion put in just one piece... well done sir. I'm inviting u to read my poem its the law

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Abderrahmane Dakir 25 January 2016

It's great feeling that you describe in this awesome poem. Thank you for sharing.

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For safety and security woman ready to marry the poem reiterates the idea and it is good.

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Myrtle Thomas 21 May 2009

I think she still desires those feelings but with her husband, rekindle the flame of desire.Beautiful

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a beautiful poem which i enjoyed it's reading..it hassome of the truth in where the woman reach a TIME AND A PLACE IN WHICH SHE WANT TO LOOK TO HER SELF AND REPLACE THE LOST DAYS....EXPRESSED VERY WELL

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 April 2009

Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband............This is how our indian woman thinks.............Good Write...........

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Duh Huh 17 February 2009

As you wrote previously, every poem has its audience. Now here, the culture is a factor, though irregardless of culture, a woman would know best about how another woman feels. I like your poem as it has given me an interest in your culture :) Thank you for opening a new venue for knowledge.

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Tara Chettur 06 January 2009

well... would like to know does age really matters, does man feel the same? again very apt words tinkering sentiments

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Malini Kadir 13 December 2008

Yes this does bring smiles.....! ! yet perhaps speaks of deeper truths in existence.... Perhaps men too stumble to prove themselves all over again.... Will you agree to that?

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Reshma Ramesh 11 December 2008

lol! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yeah...........if only.....................well penned sir! !

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 18 November 2008

Agreed, with Mr Ray.

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Seema Aarella 17 October 2008

'faithful to the spouse' thats where men fail and women struggle and keep their wedding vows.....! women of all ages do aspire this....secretly! but morals and ethics have a bigger role to play.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 28 January 2016

u got my point. i am happy that i haven; t erred in the contents of the poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 September 2008

This note in the morning must surely bring good tidings at night. Elegantly expressed and purely spoken as is the request. GW62

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

'Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband.' I love this poem, the last lines are nice.10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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