I must be the centre of attention
And reaffirm my desirability.
I must feel validated as a woman
And re-experience the romance of love.
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Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband................Great thoughts.
A superb creation! The inner urge of a woman after forty has been narrated in philosophical parlance. Great work!
The psychology of a married woman in her mid forties has been nicely interpreted. Thanks.
very bold and incisive, so confidently articulating on subjects most of us will fumble.Let be burnt the ennui of monogamy. Brilliant poem.
nice work sir. I love the way you put so much emotions into one piece.
so much emotion put in just one piece... well done sir. I'm inviting u to read my poem its the law
It's great feeling that you describe in this awesome poem. Thank you for sharing.
For safety and security woman ready to marry the poem reiterates the idea and it is good.
I think she still desires those feelings but with her husband, rekindle the flame of desire.Beautiful
a beautiful poem which i enjoyed it's reading..it hassome of the truth in where the woman reach a TIME AND A PLACE IN WHICH SHE WANT TO LOOK TO HER SELF AND REPLACE THE LOST DAYS....EXPRESSED VERY WELL
Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband............This is how our indian woman thinks.............Good Write...........
As you wrote previously, every poem has its audience. Now here, the culture is a factor, though irregardless of culture, a woman would know best about how another woman feels. I like your poem as it has given me an interest in your culture :) Thank you for opening a new venue for knowledge.
well... would like to know does age really matters, does man feel the same? again very apt words tinkering sentiments
Yes this does bring smiles.....! ! yet perhaps speaks of deeper truths in existence.... Perhaps men too stumble to prove themselves all over again.... Will you agree to that?
lol! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yeah...........if only.....................well penned sir! !
'faithful to the spouse' thats where men fail and women struggle and keep their wedding vows.....! women of all ages do aspire this....secretly! but morals and ethics have a bigger role to play.
u got my point. i am happy that i haven; t erred in the contents of the poem
This note in the morning must surely bring good tidings at night. Elegantly expressed and purely spoken as is the request. GW62
'Yes, I must waste no time to test my worth And remain faithful with my husband.' I love this poem, the last lines are nice.10+
Aspirations of a woman is explained. Beautiful thoughts