A Woman Comments
A woman doesn’t fill a space;
She occupies a mood,
And although she may contemplate-
She will never brood.
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these lines made me chuckle (out loud, but not TOO loud) . She slips it through her pores, And though unspoken, you will find- You’ll notice it much more. this shall fit nicely into Section A of November's a showcase for PH poets. [section A is for poems 'not much more than 12 lines long...or 12 or less! ] bri :) and i'll slip it into MyPoemList with over 2000 more of your poems to chose from, i THINK i can find others for showcases.
The more the merrier. I always liked this poem. Poems are like strange quarks; don't know where they came from or where they might be heading.. and I am always making more, so you never need fear running out! hehe
Wonderful rhyming scheme, the piece flows very well, excellent poetry.
Your writing ability continues to awe me, this is a beautiful, spiritual piece of art. Very well done.
So nice! I am very amazed by this skill that you have, best to you always
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7/29/2025 7:18:45 AM # 1.0.0
i was going to use this in August 2017's showcase, but i see in a previous comment that i apparently used it in one. let me search out another! bri :)