Monday, November 2, 2015

A Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

You think you can hold me down
Keep me in a servile state
You think you can have your own
Unmindful of my feelings and desires
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2022

A powerful poem.... highly expressive!

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2016

Hi Sheen, I am the moon That stirs the waves I am a woman Who knows her worth Very beautiful but stormy words. Your inner self has opened up to express your feelings and emotions. Loved reading. Thank you.

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Souren Mondal 08 February 2016

[...]I am not an autumn leaf You can trample on as you will I am the flower that pricks The hand that plucks it I am the moon That stirs the waves And I am a woman Who knows her worth.[...] Powerful and poignant. Your poem reminded me of Kishwar Naheed's wonderful poem 'I am not that Woman', where she says - 'I am the woman Whom you bought and sold In the name of my own chastity Not knowing That I can walk on water When I am drowning.' ____ A very powerful statement indeed. We need to have a society where 'womanhood' will not be defined by men, but women themselves will choose what they want to be. Thanks for sharing Nosheen. A powerful one with sheer beauty.10/10 :)

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Valsa George 31 January 2016

This poem has the power of a sweeping tide! It reminds me of Maya Angelou's poem Still I Rise and Phenomenal woman! Only a woman who has a sense of self worth can prosper in this male dominated society!

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Valsa George 31 January 2016

This poem has the power as that of a sweeping tide! It reminds me of Maya Angelou's poem Still I Rise and Phenomenal woman! Only a woman who has a sense of self worth can prosper in this male dominated society!

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A priceless perspective that could have only been penned by a woman os who understands her own priceless worth. Well written my friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 January 2016

Mad Pride will never bring peace to the House. Nice work.

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Fog Runner 19 January 2016

Right in the fat face of male oppression, a bold striking of the Truth Bell... This is beauteous.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 November 2015

And I am a woman Who knows her worth. Who can deny the worth of a woman, an amazing poem..................................10

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Saadat Tahir 09 November 2015

nice forceful lines presented and packaged well... the age old dilemma of Eve's daughter. lucid and candid.... even if a bit exasperated. liked

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 November 2015

Little do you know What wealth I have inside And you with all your might Cannot steal it from me Beautiful. Self-consciousness, revolutionary poem. so should all women be, Then the men will not exploit women. Sad to see that even in the 21st Centuary women are considered to be slaves. This poem you should spread and give it in Facebook and ask all the women to read it. Create a revolution and free women from Slavery. Take it as a divine call dear Poetess. thank you. tony

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Nosheen Irfan 07 November 2015

Can't thank you enough for such encouraging comments. I feel truly empowered. Thank u tony.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 November 2015

A true virtue of a woman. Strong and Confident. Liked it.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2015

Very well written poem on women some lines are crafty: I am the flower that pricks The hand that plucks it I am the moon That stirs the waves And I am a woman Who knows her worth........It deserves 10 points.

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Nosheen Irfan 05 November 2015

Thank you so much for appreciation.

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