Sunday, March 22, 2015

A Woman Comments

Rating: 2.8

a woman I knew for a moment
when we danced for a season or two
was the comfort of stars and midnight
and a waltz and an I love you
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 16 May 2016

Nice lyrics Barry. I guess I heard this poem as I read it. They rhyme scheme flows like a country love song. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Love is complicated, but the song is simple. I like the juxtaposition. And again, only a few seasons, not all four. I kind of like that approach. Leaves some hope for the other seasons....

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Barry Middleton 16 May 2016

I actually wrote this while undergoing chemo and having auditory hallucinations of music. I wrote a bunch of song lyrics during that time but this was one of the best. Thank you for the comment, I am very glad you could hear the music within the poem.

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