Was that a wisp of mist I saw, swirling across the lawn,
Drifting through the shrubbery, this early November’s dawn.
Frost had gathered on the grass, making it all crisp and white,
And so a chilly day has shown a vision of delight.
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You've captured a beautiful winter scene here. Well written. Andrew x
This is just a very lovely poem, the imagery, and, of course, the sound of the words. Uriah
This is lovely Ernestine, wonderful imagery, you have captured a winters scene perfectly, best wishes Lynda xx
I love the way you observe, and glory in things natural. A serene, finely depicted piece. t x
You've described the natures winter wonder to a T Ernestine, thank you! *10*! Thad
You have wonderfully captured it well, Ern..A pleasure to read..
You have wonderfully captured it well, Ern..A pleasure to read..
Ernestine, driving home early Sunday morning the ground was all white from a heavy frost. A chill rose in the air. This wonderful poem reminded me of that and of the party I had been to on Saturday night. A pleasure to read and I felt the chill here. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
A wisp of winter that floats the air Ernestine, sounds beautiful, this morning I woke up to see a winter wonderland myself, , I ride a scooter in to work, cold but stunningly beautiful along the lanes Thankyou for this one Ernestine, lovely feel to it Take care Love duncan X
An ephemeral happening captured by the words of a true artist in poetry.I enjoyed this one very much Ernestine. Sid.
The imagery in this poem is exquisite. Absolutely wonderful poem!