Thursday, October 9, 2008

A Wish Runs Through Comments

Rating: 5.0

A wish runs through
The soft lines
Of your protruding bust,
And a lightening
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Harish k. Thakur
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 October 2008

An interesting write.........*10

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Anjali Sinha 11 October 2008

hmmm 'a wish runs through' what is it behind those kestrels of passion' maybe a ripe apple falling in ---. nice write -lots of passion +++++10 anjali

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Anna Kelly 09 October 2008

A very moving poem Harish...softness and might entwined. A soulful and sensual depiction of your heroic subject :)

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