A Wish Come True Comments

FIZ, I just scrolled down your list of titles and would like to return to read more. Are any you esp. would like me to read and comment on? bri :)

I don't know why it's spelled this way, with just two " e" s, while I think it is pronounced like it has 3! undefinable [ˌəndəˈfīnəb(ə) l] DEFINITION adjective form of undefined ................... Anyway it is very clear the speaker REALLY LIKES the object (man or woman) spoken of. Nice. bri ;)

Falana Idowu Zion, May your wish come True. The Poem The Smile, The Gaze, The, Beauty, The Smile, Bright and Beautiful, Beyond Beautiful, Undeniable, " You're just a wish come true" The poet's ardent longing for the wish is well evident and clearly portrayed. Keep on writing.

Simple and beautiful poem. Loved its flow. Thanks for sharing.

as seen thru the eyes of love! good write

Nice one.. very good.. clear 10 Meet me Friday,24th July 2020 I wish you to be happy and remain smiles in all the circumstance and meet me if you get the chance Hasmukh Mehta

Thanks for the invitation to read this poem. It has some very good points and good thoughts. However, as Michael Burch mentioned, the third stanza doesn't really make sense. His suggestion is excellent.

It is a fortune to have such a soul as companion in life, it seems! Nice poem to read!

While in love every beautiful thing reflects beauty of beloved. A nice poem to read.

Pure beauty is beautifully explained.

Beautiful poem. So heartwarming. Lovely.

A well written composition. Simply marvelous...10++

Very nice poem. Keep on going.

Very nice poem. Keep on going....

I like your poem. It has nice meter, nice rhyme and a nice spirit. However " Just like the way you do" doesn't really go with trees being beautiful. Perhaps consider: The trees are beautiful Just like you OR The trees are beautiful And so are you

Brilliant articulation. It transforms love into a thing of the other world. This is an outstanding piece of poetry. Thanks a lot.

Beautiful excellent poem and well worded. Thank you for your invitation, Falana. Best regards.