Monday, December 24, 2012

A Wish Before Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some sweet night, whilst death finds me
where on earth she be, and if she comes to see
For the last time her touch I will feel
Few pleasing moments from death I will steal
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kanav justa
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* Sunprincess * 11 July 2014

............honestly this is the best poem I read today....loved reading every single word of this sweet poem....

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

Truly poetic and very well written.

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Amitava Sur 07 February 2014

A lovely poem with emotions which touches heart with nice flow of woeds

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Bijay Poudel 01 January 2014

Made my day...wat a beauty! ! !

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 December 2013

A brilliant poem. To sum it up in a few words, I may say it is a 'Taj Mahal 'of verse

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Morose Mermaid 26 November 2013

For the last time her touch I will feel Few pleasing moments from death I will steal No matter how sore that death will be If she comes to me, I will leave merrily ... love it... nice write indeed...

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Lyn Paul 31 October 2013

A heartfelt poem with flowing words. The titles is suited perfectly

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Patricia Grantham 05 June 2013

This is truly a great write. Having to get a wish before death is probably one of the most interesting request thats ever known. Sometimes death may come so quickly and unexpectedly that one can never get a last wish in. You have written a most creditable write about ones last wish. Touched my heart dearly.

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Ruby Mostazir 05 June 2013

so emotional it touch my heart.....speechless !

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Dee Corpolongo 03 June 2013

This is a beautifully written and very emotionally felt poem of love....and even so through your last moments~ Excellent poem and wish...forevermore.

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Captain Cur 30 May 2013

A very personal poem excellently penned. Very moving and emotional.

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Yasmin Khan 18 May 2013

A few pleasing moments stolen from death you plan to spend with her and then leaving merrily in ecstasy.It's written with an emotional pen.

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Shahzia Batool 23 January 2013

Good comments on a good poem, the unpunctuated flow experiences no ebb, or obstruction anywhere...

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Valsa George 20 January 2013

Overflowing with such intense passion for your sweet heart! Your resolution to love her even if she doesn't turn up to have a last glance at you when you go away is the height of your selfless feel for her!

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Neetha Sasidharan 17 January 2013

so coollll....grt poem...grt rhymes.....grt idea.....evrything is just grt....kp penning

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Babatunde Aremu 01 January 2013

This is an emotion-laden poem. Great work, I like it

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Chandra Thiagarajan 31 December 2012

A very creditable and moving poem that strikes at the chords of the heart. You have great talent and I'm sure you'll reach great heights in the realm of poetry

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

Outstanding write of great emotional depth, you draw a picture so vividly of sadness and happiness entwined. The great pain you feel brings you closer to your own kind of paradise! !

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A fantastic collection of lines illuminating your passion and love! The blend of thought planks and imaginative flutter can rarely be so great.May be, the death being away as of now your wish will be renovated on the canvas of an all seeing mind, Kanav.

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Zeenat Fatima 29 December 2012

fantastic poem.. Marvelous! !

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