A Wish Before Death Comments

............honestly this is the best poem I read today....loved reading every single word of this sweet poem....

Truly poetic and very well written.

A lovely poem with emotions which touches heart with nice flow of woeds

Made my day...wat a beauty! ! !

A brilliant poem. To sum it up in a few words, I may say it is a 'Taj Mahal 'of verse

For the last time her touch I will feel Few pleasing moments from death I will steal No matter how sore that death will be If she comes to me, I will leave merrily ... love it... nice write indeed...

A heartfelt poem with flowing words. The titles is suited perfectly

This is truly a great write. Having to get a wish before death is probably one of the most interesting request thats ever known. Sometimes death may come so quickly and unexpectedly that one can never get a last wish in. You have written a most creditable write about ones last wish. Touched my heart dearly.

so emotional it touch my heart.....speechless !

This is a beautifully written and very emotionally felt poem of love....and even so through your last moments~ Excellent poem and wish...forevermore.

A very personal poem excellently penned. Very moving and emotional.

A few pleasing moments stolen from death you plan to spend with her and then leaving merrily in ecstasy.It's written with an emotional pen.

Good comments on a good poem, the unpunctuated flow experiences no ebb, or obstruction anywhere...

Overflowing with such intense passion for your sweet heart! Your resolution to love her even if she doesn't turn up to have a last glance at you when you go away is the height of your selfless feel for her!

so coollll....grt poem...grt rhymes.....grt idea.....evrything is just grt....kp penning

This is an emotion-laden poem. Great work, I like it

A very creditable and moving poem that strikes at the chords of the heart. You have great talent and I'm sure you'll reach great heights in the realm of poetry

Outstanding write of great emotional depth, you draw a picture so vividly of sadness and happiness entwined. The great pain you feel brings you closer to your own kind of paradise! !

A fantastic collection of lines illuminating your passion and love! The blend of thought planks and imaginative flutter can rarely be so great.May be, the death being away as of now your wish will be renovated on the canvas of an all seeing mind, Kanav.

fantastic poem.. Marvelous! !