Tuesday, March 28, 2023

A Wish, A Desire. Comments

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I wish there was a doorway to your heart
So, I could rush on to it and open with silken touch.
No pleasure would satisfy my desire for you,
I wish I could hand a love board with sweet kisses
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 29 March 2023

A real wish of love nicely penned.

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Gordon Walter 29 March 2023

True expression ' The longing for the fire that burns quietly within my soul.

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Rajan T Renganathan 29 March 2023

Keeping my fingers crossed, so that your wish come true.. Add me in your list as well.

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Shreya Hacks 28 March 2023

Very crafty wish and desire you carry for your love be it for Almighty/humans/ nature....

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M. Asim Nehal 28 March 2023

Thank you for your valuable comment.

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