Monday, October 20, 2014

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When it will be my time to go,
I won't bother about what you owe,
To me in cash, kind or measures of love,
I'll forgive you before my soul goes above.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Aniruddha Pathak 10 March 2019

'Your eternal love is my perpetual debt'. Indeed, well-said.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

Thanks for quoting the lines. Inspired by your inspiration, @Aniruddha Pathak.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

What a nice poem tip to toe attired with..Your eternal love is my perpetual debt., recently I composed That's how sun dies.. theme is same death..thank you

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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2020

Thank you, dear poet @Aftab Alam Khursheed, for leaving behind an appreciative comment, to which I am replying five years and a half later. Sadly, you have left for Eternity in the mean time. May God rest your soul in eternal peace!

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