Wednesday, February 5, 2014

A Wish Comments

Rating: 3.6

a wish to get back the smile lost,
days seem cloven with deep dark frost,
when will the dews of joy shine again,
relieving the aches and the throbbing pain.
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Sonali Ganguly
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Jaya Das 31 December 2016

brilliant lines penned here...I loved what you wish and wish all your wishes get fulfilled...great imagery! !

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Siddartha Montik 15 December 2016

We do not do as much in pretense! we do all have though! Lovely write! 10+++!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 May 2016

If all the wishes could fulfill, what remains in lfe.........................................nice poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 April 2016

Yeah all wishes are not got fulfilled always.Nice.

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Tom Billsborough 28 March 2016

writing this fine poem has strengthened your wings Tom Billsborough

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Kishore Kumar Das 17 March 2016

one proposes, God disposes........but the work must go on....this central idea expressed so lucidly....

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Wonderful desciptions. i love it. Perfect

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Amitava Sur 13 March 2014

Very nice Sonali, loved your penning. Life is like that only so subtle and so uncertain. Still I wish you in your words let their wings get the strength to fly high, You may read my poems 1) Had I have two big wings 2) Enjoy being complete you.... see if you find some hints

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 March 2014

a wish to know what heart searches for, accepting the few which one to ignore, choices are many but chances are none, to dance along the tune is not that easy one. Good penning- continue your search -definitely you will win

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