Sunday, April 8, 2012

A Wish Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wish I can break the chains
So I can be free
And I wish I can find a cure
To heal my wings again
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Fadwa Daddou Gmiden
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Joseph Ojogba Daniel 28 April 2012

I love your poems, they cause reflection. I'll advice u master your lines and edit every word before you paste. Eg 'i wish i can BROKE the chains' i think you intended to use BREAK

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