A Wish Comments

I enjoyed the concepts contained within this piece; for me, the use of grammar would greatly improve the meaning and flow of this lovely poem. -Joe

lovely discribing of lonliness amazing poem well done

Filled with so much love, I especailly appricated the tenderness you have incorporated in this write, you leave the reader wanting to read more and reach out and touch your hand, to say, it will be ok...... Very touching... Bonnie

how we love to be with our loved ones

Although a little bit dark but it's a nice poem.8

Very well written U get 10++ Thanks for your nice comment on my poem Nature.

A lovely poem with Rhythm.10 for it.

....finely came out verses.........10

This poem sounds like the tide of the wave, coming forth and back, from present to past, from reality to dream, in nostalgic tones. The shortness of each line allows a concise thought, precisely like those links which come to our minds when day-dreaming with wide-open eyes. This wish is a wish to dream, to make wings stronger to help you fly in life and reality. Wonderfully well written and such a beautiful thought! 10!

A poignant dream of the past but so beautifuuly expressed. Thanks.