A Wish Comments

wowwwwwww if only wishes were horses then men would ride good write dear Sam -10 anjali

You want God's organization to be a voluntary organization, suo moto knowing His subjects' predicaments! ! ! Well, I have to accept.

Very thought provoking. Your wish is well expressed. Kind regards, Sandra

God is there or not beyond human intelligence But God we need for our daily existance................ God will be there when we need But there may be some delay indeed..........well written

so rt there sam the search for divinity is age old...as old as human memory and as intense as the search for self provocative and reflective lines... cheers

A very thought provoking write, God is what we want him to be I think, 10 Lynda xx

10 for this cute piece.

a good prayer of comparison..but God is God...

we all become a part of GOD. GR8T

Dear Samayan, Does God wants us to pray for self? Certainly not. There is more charm in praying for others. You will enjoy more in sharing your food with someone who is not properly fed for days on.There is more joy in giving than asking for. You might have observed that the palms of the poor upturn much easily than the riches. To my mind, with a little thought, you can present it much better.--Rajkumar

God bless you, Samanayana. CP

a wonderfu prayer...hope your prayers are answered!

Wish, the Almighty keeps you mentally, physically fit to serve others...nice thought

offering a prayer to others is not bad...a sort piece but meaningfull..naizz

It is a nice to read!

there it's clear you want you only...thanks...a thought well brought out

Its all about our perception of God......does he expect us to pray for ourselves or look beyond....A very thought provoking poem Samanyan - one that leaves the reader groping for answers...great work 10+++

deep penetrative thoughts about religion...still, perhaps, as long as we define God in this way or that way, it is not right? For the description is never the thing described? The poem poses impt questions and does it so effectively....