Thursday, June 12, 2008

A Wish Comments

Rating: 4.9

A friend
Stoically said,
I wish
My son would die
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Mamta Agarwal
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A parent's Love is shown in many ways and sometimes we make the sacrifices that go beyond understanding.Namaste.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2008

This poem touched me, a 10 for it. A wonderful piece!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

...a 10 has been clicked for this astonishing composition.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2008

A terrible tragedy beyond anyone's digestion. You are a true poet bringing out such real life events into poetry. sathya narayana

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 June 2008

I don't think anyone could understand her pain as well as she. It is heart breaking to think about what some children will face. Good bless you my tenderhearted friend. Loyd

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Abha Sharma 20 June 2008

The parents’ life is more painful for they realize whereas the life of such special children is in dark, the lines truly define the trauma of a parent, helpless and worried… I salute to all those parents who have against all odds have shown courage and smilingly cared for their special children… Abha

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Raj Nandy 16 June 2008

A fact and reality, expressed thoughtfully in poetry! I am not yet convinced about the doctrine of re-birth! But I do believe in right thoughts, actions and deeds, - which must be practised as long as we live! This has been conveyed in my poem, - Breaking The Shackles Of Re-Birth! - Raj Nandy

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

Wishes we make; we carry expectations but the disposal is at some other end. Wishing to remain a helping hand to the needy dearer ones rather than trying to think beyond unknown ends is better…good poem.10

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Vidi Writes 12 June 2008

Harsh, the reality Harsh, the experience Can't read in between the lines Have to travel in parellel And view the counterpart. Dear Poet, its apt You get into those shoes Feel the temper and learn the truth of that wish. Simple flow with elegant theme. Thank you.

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