A friend
Stoically said,
I wish
My son would die
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A terrible tragedy beyond anyone's digestion. You are a true poet bringing out such real life events into poetry. sathya narayana
I don't think anyone could understand her pain as well as she. It is heart breaking to think about what some children will face. Good bless you my tenderhearted friend. Loyd
The parents’ life is more painful for they realize whereas the life of such special children is in dark, the lines truly define the trauma of a parent, helpless and worried… I salute to all those parents who have against all odds have shown courage and smilingly cared for their special children… Abha
A fact and reality, expressed thoughtfully in poetry! I am not yet convinced about the doctrine of re-birth! But I do believe in right thoughts, actions and deeds, - which must be practised as long as we live! This has been conveyed in my poem, - Breaking The Shackles Of Re-Birth! - Raj Nandy
Wishes we make; we carry expectations but the disposal is at some other end. Wishing to remain a helping hand to the needy dearer ones rather than trying to think beyond unknown ends is better…good poem.10
Harsh, the reality Harsh, the experience Can't read in between the lines Have to travel in parellel And view the counterpart. Dear Poet, its apt You get into those shoes Feel the temper and learn the truth of that wish. Simple flow with elegant theme. Thank you.
A parent's Love is shown in many ways and sometimes we make the sacrifices that go beyond understanding.Namaste.