A Wish Comments
As stream of consciousness
Changes the course,
Its infinite dimensions arise,
When we rise above this body,
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Good use of alliterative device. A well expressed poem. Sylva
enjoy Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, My blessings shall be with you, my dear, You should always in life flourish.
A poem of wisdom and depth, with tranquil rhythm and rhyme.
An extremely thoughtful commentary on the last stages of a man's life and after life. You have put it very beautifully. Let us look at the following lines: I am immortal, I cannot die / A simple funeral you should try / A peaceful departure I would wish
a beautiful creation..........with a rhythem........ i also wish to get ur views on mine...
Beautifully written and beautifully crafted. I wish I also have. Thank you for this wonderful poem....
An enlightening piece. How an ageing soul wishes the world and the people around him to go on, once he is gone? Very nice.
I have not been through all you're poems but this one cought my eye but I'm sure you get this all the time Tripp
Atman concept. Path of ‘Jnana Yoga’…to reach ‘Enlightenment’ ‘Knowing Thyself’… ‘I’m Thou’ … nicely composed… Sir… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
I agree wholeheartedly only worn out bodies die we go on forever
thoughts expressed are profound.poem touches the mind and stirs the heart
As stream of consciousness Changes the course, Its infinite dimensions arise, ---------- and the way it will go will depend to our deeds
As stream of conscioousness changes course... lovley opening stanza andbeautiful imagination.... well done sir
Excellent thought. C.P, you are really good in conveying a message thru your poem...10++...Brishti Mazumdar
I hate this poem very much, i dont know why but you made me cry CP...I am hating this poem because you have touched my heart so much in this afternoon, i cried for remembering someone very close to me.....BRILLIANCE in composition sir.........sorry for i used the word hate........I love this poem.....10+++++++++
This is an excellent poem. I wishing would have happen to that person if he or she is no longer with us. So verbally understood.
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7/23/2025 6:57:06 AM # 1.0.0
Waste not the time in wailing and waiting, A peaceful departure I would wish, .../// superb writings I wish I wish and wishing becomes blessings o pours on the peaceful mind..........///