Saturday, September 24, 2016

A Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I had wings and could fly
I would not fly to the buoyant clouds
But crisscross the earth like a cool wind
That light up the old wrinkled face
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 27 September 2016

Great! May you have wings! I would like to see that smile. (10)

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 September 2016

An innovative write, with great imagery passing swiftly as the breeze, and bringing a bit of joy to the elders ones.

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