Tuesday, November 23, 2010

A Wise Man Once Told Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

A wise man once told me, a real man never cries,
Instead he bottles it in, all the pain, sorrow, the lies,
For crying is a weakness, all men ought to know,
It's a show of love and compassion, and that you never show,
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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2013

You are wiser than the wise man, for what you've said are really words of wisdom. The last line made me grin.10/10.

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Chuck Audette 12 July 2012

Lots of wisdom here, nice write! -chuck

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Sharon Smith 07 May 2012

Just lovely! ! Regards...Sharon.

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The 4am Poet Worm 30 November 2011

beautiful sentiment... i enjoyed this poem

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Amy Marie 09 December 2010

What a catchy poem :)

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