Sunday, October 11, 2020

A Wise Conversation Comments

Rating: 4.9

On the hilltop a voice chased me down
and forced to have a conversation
Who are you?
I said; Identifying.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 17 March 2023

Awesome poem.

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Mamta S 16 October 2020

Some conversations are heart touching and some conversations are mind blowing this is a combination of both, thank you so much for sharing this wonderful conversation.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 October 2020

We come to this earth with nothing. We go too, with nothing. But while on earth, we want everything. Indeed, a profound philosophy through this interesting conversation. Asim ji, dear Poet! ....Thank you so much. I enjoyed the reading the poem.....5 Stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 October 2020

DJ always appreciate such conversation they are healthy and thoughtful they provide enough thoughts to the mind

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Sebastian G 12 October 2020

A wisely thought poem the conversation between the soul and the heart can never be so interesting otherwise

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Sharad Bhatia 12 October 2020

In fact, we are all so busy with our lives that it seems that we all have everything but maybe nothing, such as peace एक छोटा सा ज़ज्बात रखना चाहता हूँ ज़िन्दगी भर भटक रहा हूँ सिर्फ एक सकून की खातिर, दर दर भटक रहा हूँ सिर्फ एक सकून की ख़ातिर।। Thank you so much for sharing such a lovely and thinking poem. 1000+****

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2020

Nothing! ! ! But something much needed for a lonely heart! Anything is possible in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shreya Hacks 12 October 2020

Intelligent writing. I admire your skills.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2020

A well authored philosophical poem. Truly brilliant...5 stars*****

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Michael Jack 11 October 2020

Interesting poem with quality talk.

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S H 11 October 2020

A conversation to remember and revise time and again.

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Poetic Sky 11 October 2020

Best conversation with soul on reaching pinnacle

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Sebastian G 11 October 2020

A conversation of this quality is purely divine.

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Jasmine Shayma 11 October 2020

Interesting and intelligent poem. Nice work

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Deepak S S 11 October 2020

A wise word from the soul You are not alone to desire everything, there are many, And from where you came? I said; Nothing. And where will you proceed? Again, I said; Nothing

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T Rajan Evol 11 October 2020

Nobody remains on top for long and they have to come back, the philosophy behind this poem to tell that we all toll very hard to reach at the top but after reaching there realise that what all we did is not worthy and we want to come back to our home/roots...

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Varsha M 11 October 2020

Yes clarity makes the achievement easier. So if nothing is prevalent make to something to win the race. Wanting everything itself is nothing so don't hide it in nothing...

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Khairul Ahsan 11 October 2020

Everything ends in nothingness!

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