On the hilltop a voice chased me down
and forced to have a conversation
Who are you?
I said; Identifying.
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Some conversations are heart touching and some conversations are mind blowing this is a combination of both, thank you so much for sharing this wonderful conversation.
We come to this earth with nothing. We go too, with nothing. But while on earth, we want everything. Indeed, a profound philosophy through this interesting conversation. Asim ji, dear Poet! ....Thank you so much. I enjoyed the reading the poem.....5 Stars
DJ always appreciate such conversation they are healthy and thoughtful they provide enough thoughts to the mind
A wisely thought poem the conversation between the soul and the heart can never be so interesting otherwise
In fact, we are all so busy with our lives that it seems that we all have everything but maybe nothing, such as peace एक छोटा सा ज़ज्बात रखना चाहता हूँ ज़िन्दगी भर भटक रहा हूँ सिर्फ एक सकून की खातिर, दर दर भटक रहा हूँ सिर्फ एक सकून की ख़ातिर।। Thank you so much for sharing such a lovely and thinking poem. 1000+****
Nothing! ! ! But something much needed for a lonely heart! Anything is possible in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A well authored philosophical poem. Truly brilliant...5 stars*****
A wise word from the soul You are not alone to desire everything, there are many, And from where you came? I said; Nothing. And where will you proceed? Again, I said; Nothing
Nobody remains on top for long and they have to come back, the philosophy behind this poem to tell that we all toll very hard to reach at the top but after reaching there realise that what all we did is not worthy and we want to come back to our home/roots...
Yes clarity makes the achievement easier. So if nothing is prevalent make to something to win the race. Wanting everything itself is nothing so don't hide it in nothing...
Awesome poem.