Saturday, August 29, 2009

A Wintry Day.. Comments

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A snowy day on the sides of the Red sea
The city seems to be covered
With dazzling snow sparkles.
The roads feel like to be deserted
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KEERTHANA DINESH 1998
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Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

nice thought, at this age, you have done a decent job of composing a poem, it can also be further enhanced with better rhyming and framing..

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Nice thought and poem Keerthana, good effort

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KEERTHANA DINESH 1998

KEERTHANA DINESH 1998

Vijayawada, India
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