Saturday, January 9, 2010

A Wintery Word. Comments

Rating: 4.7

Chill call of winter can indent some sad words.
Time constructs sentences, cold for no reason.
Dawn, rising letterless scrawls sky-lines absurdly.
How many words can winter write in it's season?
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 22 January 2010

Many metaphorical treasures to be found in this these wintery lines. Superb write. Always your friend, Sandra

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Linda Ori 09 January 2010

BRRR! ! Well, this definitely put a chill in the air, as if it's not cold enough already! Yes, no matter the season, 'farewell' is never a comfortable word. Great visual imagery and strong emotion here, and a very nice read, Fay.

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