Monday, November 7, 2011

A Winters Night Comments

Rating: 3.1

On a cold winters night,
filled with whiteness and sparkling lights
all around this small little town.
Houses with their chimneys filled with the flame of warmth.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2020

The inspiration on Winters Night is so touching and nice. Mountains wrapped in blankets of snowflakes, sky filled with northern lights of coldness up above and the sitting of a beautiful girl silently on bench with sadness as if she has lost her christmas spirit are much impressive. A marvelous poem is amazingly shared.

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Thoughts Of A Poet 19 October 2012

awwww that's so good i love, it makes me want it too snow soon,

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Aqeb Benazir 18 October 2012

Everyone below me says everything...it's got life in it! ! and the scenarios depicted are very well structured. nice write!

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Hamid Negah 27 July 2012

very good i love it.

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Hamid Negah 27 July 2012

very good i love it.

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Craig Mize 19 November 2011

Beautiful poem and very well written. I was picturing a beautiful winter night and then enter this one soul that makes you feel that everything and everyone isn't that happy on jolly old Christmas

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

Such imaging, you are an amazing writer..... and as you look into the sky, see the angels flying closely by. never far from you or too high, Always holding you as you lie In your dreams of freedom by and by. hugs n blessings

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