Monday, January 5, 2009

A Winter-White Wish. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fierce, glittering winter-bright Moon,
Lighting this white, mysterious world.
Shine throughout night, he'll be home soon
And need your lamp to keep unfurling
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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

I'll stand with candle, - listening. Please guide his way back here again. - - - - - -> what a well-written image! ! ! ! ! !

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Yelena M. 20 April 2009

A wonderful mysterious imagery reminding me of the poetry of symbolists.Thanks for sharing! Best wishes. A.

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Gordon Wilkinson 19 March 2009

loved the feelings it shows 10

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Chitra - 19 January 2009

A very picturesque poem with the message aptly delivered

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Bob Blackwell 17 January 2009

Reminded me of a time many years ago when I used to walk home along a tree clad winding lane. The moon used to cast many shadows but gave me light to show the way. A lovely poem, of a winter landscape. Bob

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Kevin Wells 16 January 2009

A very picturesque piece. I can imagine these words inspiring the subject of a painting. There seems to be a whole story waiting to be told behind this cleverly constructed verse.

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Deva De Silva 16 January 2009

Vivid, whole, and heart-felt… When I reached the last verse it cuffed my insides.

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Scott Austin 16 January 2009

You have allowed the read to image these words in a prefect picture…thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. Scott

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I saw you with the candle. and i saw the snow.. this is magnific... Is it personal, or creative, or personal with a bit of creativity?

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Sid John Gardner. 14 January 2009

A 'Frost' like poem Fay.Nice poem. Sid xx

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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

This poem is full of images...beautiful write....Fi

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Sandra Fowler 11 January 2009

You speak the language of winter moonlight with exceptional grace. Prase for a beautiful, luminous write. Love, SandraX

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 January 2009

I'll stand with candle, - listening..................oh what a humanistic approach to this mysterious world by its scintillating nature, the way it enligtens the earth so the poet too, unequalled grandeur seems to wades through to wake the humanity from decadence, bravo! ! ! ! , brilliant thougt of course ingenious,10+++++, i do appreciate, thanks for sharing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 January 2009

A beautiful image of moonlight and to capture this image again what a beautiful wish in candle light! ........10.

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Robert Howard 07 January 2009

The image of moonlight reflected in the snow evokes thoughts of peaceful beauty- artfully stated with sumptuous language and fluid rhythm.

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Ron Flowers 07 January 2009

You make it sound so beautiful, Fay. This is a 10. Warm regards Ron

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Kris Smith 06 January 2009

What a lovely write Fay your pen speaks with such warmth loved it Chris +++ 10

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Fay Slimm

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