Monday, September 13, 2010

A Winter Piece Comments

Rating: 3.0

OVER the rim of a lacquered bowl,
Where a cold blue water-color stands
I see the wintry breakers roll
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Bliss William Carman
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Susan Williams 21 January 2017

I see the wintry breakers roll And heave their froth up the freezing sands.- - don't you wish you could write such a watercolor image in words? I know I do

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M Asim Nehal 21 January 2017

Rhythmic poem, nicely conceived and written.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 December 2015

Winter wonderfully described. Enjoyed the rhyme and meaning of the wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Bliss William Carman

Bliss William Carman

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