Monday, January 6, 2020

A Winter Pause Comments

Rating: 4.9

It was the first day of winter
With hat and coat snug and tight
Outside my booted feet crunched
For it had snowed all night.
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Marilyn Lott
COMMENTS
Sylvia Frances Chan 13 January 2020

CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Most deserved, dear Marilyn. I add this sweet dashing poem to MyPoemList. A 10 Full Score and much much more! On the day you received this honour, I have read your poem already, but I was not at home, so my laptop I left home and now I am just back. I am accustomed to give response from my laptop and not from my iPhone. God's Blessings.

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Marilyn Lott 22 January 2020

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments on my poem, Sylvia. I truly do appreciate it as I appreciate this poem being picked for poem of the day. Always a thrill.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 January 2020

It's always a great pleasure to receive this prize of honour, YES! A prize of honour for your loveliest poem about winter at your place. In our country we know snow but not as much as in your place. That's why we go every year to Serfuas, aski center with much snow and such a pleasure skiing from th mountains. That's in Austria, Marilyn. You have here a very beautiful photograph of the winter at your place added to this fascinating poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 January 2020

A swing rocked very gently As ghostly children swung I could almost hear voices softly For winter had just begun.../// beautiful poem penned; enjoyable winter poem

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Marilyn Lott 22 January 2020

Thank you so much for your special comment.

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Lyn Paul 11 January 2020

Lovely to read your beautiful poem for I have not witnessed or felt snow.

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you so much Lyn for your comment. I hope you get a chance to see snow someday. We are expecting some soon. Unusual for us.

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2020

Beautiful rendition of words in an amazing piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Great line! A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

I am so glad you enjoyed my poem Chinedu. Thank you!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 January 2020

Foggy breath! ! ! ! Muse of Winter. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Edward, so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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Kim Barney 11 January 2020

Congratulations! It's good to see a poem appear as poem of the day from someone on my friends list! I have neglected you lately. Will come back soon and read more of your work! (I don't think I will sit in that swing just now. It's 28 degrees at my house!)

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Kim. Send me a facebook friend request if you'd like. I have lost my note to you 3 times.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2020

CONGRATULATIONS! A beautiful poem presented basing upon your perception. An excellent poem is shared.

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Lodigiana Poetess 11 January 2020

What a delightful piece! congratulations on being selected as Poem of the Day..a worthy choice and much enjoyed Lodigiana xx

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Jeanette Telusma 11 January 2020

Bravo! Wonderful work. Congratulations on your being chosen for poem of the day ❤️

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you so much, Jeanette!

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 January 2020

This is really a very beautiful poem on winter. Loved the flow and sweet rhyming. Deserved to be POD. Congrats.

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Anil, I appreciate it.

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 11 January 2020

Wonderfully worded and crafted poem making the reader to imbibe the chill in the winter. Thank you for sharing the same. Congrats for the well deserved positioning. X

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Jayatissa, for your kind comment!

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Kesav Easwaran 11 January 2020

I could see my foggy breath In the frosty icy air A white world very solemn So come outside if you dare. Excellent stanza Marilyn. Speaking winter visual there.10+

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Kesav, I'm so glad you enjoyed my wintery vision!

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Sankaran Ayya 11 January 2020

I could see my foggy breath In the frosty icy air A white world very solemn So come outside if you dare. - - -interesting lines congrats for meriting to today's member poem poet Mailyin Lott

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you for your comment, Sankaran, I appreciate it.

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Matthew Holloway 11 January 2020

wonderful thank you for sharing

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Matthew!

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Bharati Nayak 11 January 2020

I could see my foggy breath In the frosty icy air A white world very solemn So come outside if you dare. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Another change now in store It must be true because Mother Nature's excitement Caused a bit of winter pause- - -The mood and emotions as well as the nature in winter have fine expressions in this poem.Congratulations for this wonderful Poem of the Day!

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Bharati, so much for your comment. It is a joy for my poem to be poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 January 2020

A well penned wonderful poem of the day......10++++👌🤝 Congrats on your featured piece 👏👏👏

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Marilyn Lott 11 January 2020

Thank you, Bernard, I love when my poems are featured. Such a pleasure!

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