Tuesday, April 24, 2018

A Winter Night Comments

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When the winds blew low and high,
The sand swiftly felt shy and gathered along
The trees and the green grass danced all
As if dancing to the musical strings emanating
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Brian 05 July 2018

Excellent write Lungelo, very imaginative and so creative in putting up a narrative poem like this one...10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Thanks Brian for adding positive contribution to this poem

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Simon 15 May 2018

What a poetic way of telling a crime story....sad that you experienced such a scene but nice artwork

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Thanks Simon, you've been a long term reader of my poetry....your comments are highly appreciated

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