Wednesday, March 19, 2008

A Winter Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cleaverest creature is a snake,
Who spends his winter not awake'
Sleeping in his long thin bed'
Brewing venom in his head.
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Heather S 17 November 2008

this poem is very imagery and enternaning its a good poem a strong 10!

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Wandering Scarlet 29 October 2008

i like this, an interesting take on human nature, exposing our restless approach on life, in comparisan to nature, which rests as us humans are in constant frenzy

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 April 2008

we humans are vulnerable..............

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