Monday, April 13, 2015

A Wine Bottle Comments

Rating: 4.5

In Life we need a needle
So it never be a feedle
we may mute it with a fiddle
But it share with a bottle
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Thampi KEE
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Amitava Sur 11 May 2015

In very short words you expressed the life very aptly. Yes life is always with quirks and twists.

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Valsa George 04 May 2015

This is an enchanting write... sweetly rhyming and witty! Enjoyed reading it Kee!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 April 2015

Yes. Funny little thing. Good. Confess, I should, I had to pick the dictionary to decipher your theme.

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Madan M 15 April 2015

a funny poem and witty

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Thampi KEE

Thampi KEE

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