A Window Of Time Comments

Right up until her death My mother would always talk of a ghost at the window that looked just like me... WOW

A bit scary at the last line on the last stanza? Good one

Oh my dear how fantastic is that this piece of work? this window is a metaphor and symbol, make this poem superb, this indirect way of writing make your poem very poetic and strong, congratulation 10/10

wonderfully written, and memorable. And the title is perfect. I think a lot of folks can see themselves in your words here. A fine penning.

A Window of Time, what a beautiful poem on mother no more and her memories. I feel glad I read it. I rate it high.

What a great memory of your late mother!I see the bond of intimacy & love between your mother &you.A great poem!

a poem that looks just like the pet running after its own dangling leash...................mystery

Right up until her death My mother would always talk of a ghost at the window that looked just like me. a sense of mystery......... the boy running to mum..... mum telling of a ghost...... it is very interesting to read this and think.. thank you. tony

I like the mystery of this. At first I thought you were looking through the metaphoric window of memory and then you took us to Stephen King territory. Well written and well enjoyed!

Very nostalgic my friend.

A wonderful write, a great poem.....................10

excellent, makes the hairs on the back of the neck stand up!

Hello poet friend Dave. An interesting poem and great ending, I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.

Excellent write my friend appreciative.thank you for sharing!

Captivating - and haunting - I like this poem... and I'm unsettled by it.

Great write with such a suited title and interesting comments. Thank You Dave

Please do read my poem We Are

so good so good. It was fascinating. Thanks Dave Alan Walker

a fine write, like the way the central image turns..

A moment in time frozen in the mind with a window enveloping the memories of mother linking a powerful ending very original and moving...regards