I looked
out of the window of time
where I once saw my mothers eyes
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Wow. Wonderful tribute to mother.....Fantastic write. Loved the way you presented it so beautifully.
Well Dave this is beautiful well done i look forward to number three
Danny Draper (2/29/2012 2: 16: 00 AM) | Delete this message You Sir have a grace that escapes so many but here the eloquence of a deft wordsmith delivering visceral and palpable emotions free of cliche and contrived sentimentality. Onto 3.
wonderful write.... what a beautiful tribute to your mother....
your theme is fascinating. I ve read your works as you request..I owe you thanks for reading mine. Each poet writes in his own style I am a die hard formalist. I rarely try to write free style my muse begs me to desist. She says I need the discipline That is imposed by formality
I really like this poem of yours! Its truly a wonderful poem!
EXCELLENT, MOTHER! THY NAME IS LOVE, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. MAY GOD BLESS U A JOYFUL YEAR WITH FULL GOAL OF LIFE. HAPPY NEW YEAR.
a perfect addition. I love writes like this.