Saturday, December 31, 2011

A Window Of Time 2 Comments

Rating: 4.8

I looked
out of the window of time
where I once saw my mothers eyes
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Dave Alan Walker
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Richard D Remler 20 January 2019

a perfect addition. I love writes like this.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful tribute to mother.....Fantastic write. Loved the way you presented it so beautifully.

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Noreen Carden 04 September 2013

Well Dave this is beautiful well done i look forward to number three

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

a lovely write Dave and it probably was her nan. enjoyed

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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

Danny Draper (2/29/2012 2: 16: 00 AM) | Delete this message You Sir have a grace that escapes so many but here the eloquence of a deft wordsmith delivering visceral and palpable emotions free of cliche and contrived sentimentality. Onto 3.

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Sreelekha Premjit 05 February 2012

wonderful write.... what a beautiful tribute to your mother....

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Pankajam K 02 February 2012

An imagination surreal and engaging.

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Indira Babbellapati 10 January 2012

fascinating...this surreal experience!

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Deep Mukherjee 09 January 2012

Amazed at the power of one's imagination........

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Ivor Hogg 01 January 2012

your theme is fascinating. I ve read your works as you request..I owe you thanks for reading mine. Each poet writes in his own style I am a die hard formalist. I rarely try to write free style my muse begs me to desist. She says I need the discipline That is imposed by formality

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Silentpoet Grl 01 January 2012

I really like this poem of yours! Its truly a wonderful poem!

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

EXCELLENT, MOTHER! THY NAME IS LOVE, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. MAY GOD BLESS U A JOYFUL YEAR WITH FULL GOAL OF LIFE. HAPPY NEW YEAR.

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Eric Cockrell 31 December 2011

brother, i love this one... absolutely perfect!

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