Friday, July 10, 2009

# # A Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

a rapturous moment
a dull moment
as the little flower is dwindled by the wind
a dance it does to greet the music of wind
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Yelena M. 17 July 2009

breaths of wind painted by your emotion..very thoughtful and meditative piece.thanks for sharing.

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Smiley Hooker 17 July 2009

A meaningful interpretation of wind linked to human emotions. clever write! : -)

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Meggie Gultiano 17 July 2009

a nice write, Sam..i love the last line

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Louis Rams 11 July 2009

the wind will always take, but leave a replacement. good write

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Ency Bearis 11 July 2009

a refreshing imagery write....a nice poem...

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Ken E Hall 11 July 2009

The wind can blow our course of life its a strong rudder that counts very thoughtful poem as usual regards

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

Great and fantastic imagery and poetic language...10+++

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Surya . 11 July 2009

inside the cool wind.superb writing.well expressed. voted10 surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

hey sir! ! ! this is sort of a cool write indeed! ! ! liked it very much... great one to relax my mind! ! thanks for this one 10++ with love shan

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Pandian Angelina 10 July 2009

Ah! Again I say what thoughts, new light or should I say a new wind! I used to think of wind as cleansing spirit, now I recollect the dust it blew around me before the rain, yes the wind collects everything in its way clearing a path making away with old thoughts, ideas and feelings. Yes, like a wind we also gather a lot but does it only pollute - doesn't it pollinate [creat new life] sometime? Angel

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 July 2009

The rapturous moment the wind has created is well brought out here.

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Sandra Martyres 10 July 2009

Nice piece Samanyan on the wind......

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Carol Gall 10 July 2009

nice words on emotions - the wind feels like it

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