Monday, August 12, 2013

A Wind Swept Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I pen my thoughts and dreams
words I cannot say

I bear my heart to the wind
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Heather Burns
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Queeny Gona 22 May 2015

Weeping tone of the poet!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013

beautiful imagery, beautiful words and beautiful flows very lovely poem

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Poetheart Morgan 13 August 2013

And the wind carries your love Blame the romantic wind not your dreamer heart Beautiful! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2013

A superb way to involve wind for the carriage of love. Very romantic idea.

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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2013

Very imaginative write - love carried on the wind.

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Aswath Raman 13 August 2013

Aha! The glittering golden powder of love blown into wind! Excellent imagery ma'am!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

What a beautiful thought for wind swept day. Let love blow my way. Thank you.

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Rekha Mandagere 12 August 2013

Flow of thought is gently moving throughout the poem. I love the ease with which you have made taking the images of nature.

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Ramesh Rai 12 August 2013

May I take a dream or two my dreams involving you beautiful write

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Dave Walker 12 August 2013

A beautiful poem, with a great flow. It makes me think of dream catchers gently swaying in the wind.

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