Sunday, May 20, 2007

A Will? You Serious? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keeps nagging me about a will
I had not thought that I was ill.
We must protect and serve the kiddoes,
just look how many lonely widows
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 20 May 2007

You've got me giggling, Herbsy. You and your black humour! Love, G.

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Not a member No 4 20 May 2007

Although I do appreciate Your offer to officiate On the occasion of your passing on I must confess that I have sinned And therefore must renounce the right To ramble on when you are gone Or when the reaper grim decides Herbert Nehrlich must be binned It is my testimony true That I have loved your poems too But when you’ve skipped the roundabout -Three thousand poems lost in space! - How will you return my hits? Who will quell my writer’s doubt Say my rhymes are not the pits The thought has left me dazed for days So Herbert maybe you could try To circumvent the need to die I’ve heard it said, by eating less Our lives might stretch forever more That way you’d be with us still A little thinner I would guess Without the need to make a will In clothes that were too small before A fine rattling irreverent piece Herbert. Death is a serious business that should be taken lightly.. jim

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I have nothing to declare but your brilliance. t xxxx

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Alison Cassidy 20 May 2007

Herbert, this is superb. Witty and irreverent and rather bitter/sweet in an faintly mocking sort of way. I dips me lid. love, Allie xxxx

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