Friday, April 11, 2008

A Wilderness Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Particles of our last conversation
fuse with the droplets of mist,
and the last word you said, goodbye,
hovers below the lush hemlocks,
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Sonny Rainshine
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Ambika Basnett 10 July 2018

Really interesting n good .

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

I see a long, long season ahead in which I must become acquainted with nature and loneliness, Rachel Ann Butler

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Iman Djalloul 20 July 2009

I absolutely loved this. Your words painted a very vivid picture in my mind. The sense of a twisted reality left behind after we lose someone or something dear to us. Very well written. Iespecially love the fact that you ended with nature. Nature keeps me sane!

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Octavia Price 12 June 2008

This is just so beautifully crafted. The sense of loss you have invoked is very powerful. I love it.

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C.R. Clark 02 May 2008

Oh, I do like this poem. I love anything about nature and wilderness. I do sense a feeling of great loss in your words, but time spent in wilderness/nature is a great healing balm to salve the bruised soul. An excellent read. Thank you.......10...Best wishes Richard

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