Saturday, November 15, 2008

A Wild Thing. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The boisterous sheet of morning-fresh water
Tumbled, discharging explosive noise down
Into a torrent of rainbowing, caught
From the top of a towering black-crowned
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Fay Slimm
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Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay.... lovely memory of a wild encounter. Funny the things that stay with you, real things....yoyr 'Daffodil' moment....... thank you Martin

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Chuck Petz 18 November 2008

A charming story about natures hooligans.

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Tom Balch 16 November 2008

Nothing like wildlife close up to get the pen working,10+ Tom

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Tia Maria 15 November 2008

ahhh wonderful scenario you created here - I had an amazing encounter with a resident otter by a lake in the foothills of the mountains - we played for a few minutes & it was magical - they are so silky soft :) happy thoughts, luv T

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Kris Smith 15 November 2008

Beautifully written my friend one of my favourite creatures thanks Fay ageless your words are Chris 10

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Fay Slimm

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