Where does my mind start? Where does my mind end? No
expanse to the ultimate, the thoughts do not stop. Time does
not stop. It is all in perpetual motion. All a vibration in the
universe. Constant it is, alive in the conception. I am me,
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Macrocosm and Microcosm in relation…meditative stuff … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
a wonderful expression of sense of being...almost an identity, another brilliant read. a ten plus!
If you'd like to read the flip side of your poem... try 'Crucible'.Regards Sally
A Truly Deep Thought Poem... Gives The Reader, Something To Think About... You Expressed Eternity, Beautifully in the Symbolism of a Song... A Very Enjoyable Read... MoonBee
really wonderful poem, nicely expressed.......thanks for sharing 10++
Yet, I am a part of this vibration, a cord or note, in the music of the universe. Rachel Ann Butler
as exotic as the oceans as exotic as the dense wilderness as exotic as an infant's smile as exotic as a mother's warmth who knows where it starts who will ever know where it ends...
The wonder of it all the science of it all God's creation all in your poem of thought -a wild exotic it surely is ++++++10 regards
Where does my mind start? Where does my mind end? No expanse to the ultimate, the thoughts do not s......... ........................ ........................ lovely and neautiful presentation.. mind is workshop of thoughts.....nice one read mine thouhgts...inflamed mind.. sun eclispe..
About beginning and end in a pensive mood of time....philosophical poem
philosophical quests penned beautifully! its an informative poem, 10+
very nice poem... gazing at an unreachable distant sky.... contemplation.....but answers...who knows who can say great cheers
dear joe, ....it is the timelessness of time that intrigues us.where does it begin and end, only time can tell.this poem is written, in sensitivity of mature understanding of the importance of time in all our lives. 10++
good poem Joe...yes; mind is wild...and exotic too...thanks for your wisdom write...10
simply beautiful...