Saturday, October 4, 2008

A Wife For The Nightfall Comments

Rating: 2.1

I saw her in that red light street corner
Dim red lights highlighted the room, most part of her life too.
Smell of stained notes plagued her hands.
They clothed her each night in robes,
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

I must say, out of the few poems I have read from you, all being remarkable, this one is the one I had to read amny times, for the poem was amazing. Truely brillant. I am glad you have asked me to read your work, for if I had missed this, it would have been a shame!

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Bob Gibson 28 November 2008

A lot of food for thought here! great poem

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Colin Jeffery 15 October 2008

A very moving poem. Brilliant

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Colin Jeffery 15 October 2008

A very moving poem. Brilliant

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Reshma Ramesh 05 October 2008

wow wow! ! amazing......thought provoking! ! 10!

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Tia Maria 04 October 2008

If only more out there could think this way these women could become the 'Pretty Woman' they dream to be. Excellent work Jesuzz 10

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