Wednesday, January 28, 2009

A Wholly Unprecendented Wound Comments

Rating: 5.0

I said to Barry Waldbaum in the Teacher’s Center,
“One of my students asked me, ‘What’s a hermaphrodite? ’”
“That some kinda mollusk, Bernstein? ” he said,
“cause I think I seen that creature on NATURE.”
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Charles Wax
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Dee Daffodil 05 February 2009

Quite the imaginative write Charles! Hugs, Dee

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Tai Chi Italy 28 January 2009

lol you have such a wonderfully uplifting conversational narrative Charles...poor man! but at least he socked it to her! smiling at you, Tai

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Susan Jarvis 28 January 2009

There's a special skill to writing comedy. You have it in abundance, Charles - hilarious! ! S :)

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Lynda Robson 28 January 2009

I love the way you narrate the poem to us, another very funny tale, made me laugh, some men keep their socks on even if they have five toes on each foot lol, Keep writing Charles 10 Lynda xxx

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LOVEFOOL Aka 28 January 2009

Interesting write flows well and is easy to read 10+

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Ian Bowen 28 January 2009

Charles, what a most enjoyable piece of writing. Love the way you told your story. Will have to tell a few of my friends to read this one.10/10 Regards, Ian

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