Tuesday, July 8, 2014

A Wholesome Gratitude Comments

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The gossip among every dick, harry and tom,
Is always about Godly figure mom!
People opine he is strict as ring master and anger is hot red,
person is none other than our dad!
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Mihir Modi
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Mary Douglas 20 August 2014

This poem made me think a lot about my own father, also my grandfather. It helped me to appreciate them more which is a great value to receive from any poem. There is real feeling about the father expressed in this poem and overall, the feeling that while a mother may often receive credit for the good in her children, sometimes the father is standing in the shadows. I liked this poem for those reasons. And the feeling of the teasing among the friends about the strictness of the Dad added a flash of something, a color of something interesting and living to the poem.

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