Wednesday, November 12, 2008

A Whittle Of Words... Comments

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A Whittle of Words...
Sitting, slumped in a chair,
On a wooden porch
And under the sun
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John Tansey
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Kathryn Marie Thurman 06 December 2008

loved the imagery and the poem was very well written. kudos to you -kathryn

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Anjali Sinha 15 November 2008

wow a nice one this touched my heart 'As so many crumpled pieces of paper.' ++++++10 goes to my fav list regards anju

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Christine Austin Cole 12 November 2008

It is in the shaping, the carving, The very paring down of the fat; That the art, itself, disappears. I could ponder on this for a while, wondering... did it disappear, or was it perhaps revealed for having been unnecessary clutter cut away from it? If this be the outcome of the exercise, I'd have to go with the latter, actually. Keep wittling - surely there's more 'in there' waiting to be unearthed. Christine

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John Tansey

John Tansey

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