Sunday, March 4, 2018

A White-Washed Tomb Comments

Rating: 4.6

Bitterness and anger- I can't live like this-
Spitting words at each other, barbs that don't miss.
Hateful venom spewed out on white walls, now stained
With dark rolling rivers that bleed through new paint
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Christopher Kirchner
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Christopher. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Lyllie Menjivar 05 March 2018

Deep vibes of a marital relationship. Well, done. ***

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2018

Deep feelings of disgust at a period of lowest ebb of marriage, conveyed with clarity of thought and mind. A sad story told in eloquent finesse. Thanks for sharing Christopher and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

hate, bitterness, anger, no happiness.. a reality of life in a marital relationship., very well potrayed. These are facts of life.. that you write my dear poet...... thankyou very much. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 March 2018

Christopher, such a well written poem...10++++

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