Bitterness and anger- I can't live like this-
Spitting words at each other, barbs that don't miss.
Hateful venom spewed out on white walls, now stained
With dark rolling rivers that bleed through new paint
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Deep feelings of disgust at a period of lowest ebb of marriage, conveyed with clarity of thought and mind. A sad story told in eloquent finesse. Thanks for sharing Christopher and do remain enriched.
hate, bitterness, anger, no happiness.. a reality of life in a marital relationship., very well potrayed. These are facts of life.. that you write my dear poet...... thankyou very much. tony
A fine start with a nice poem, Christopher. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks