Tuesday, April 20, 2010

A White Night Comments

Rating: 3.0

THE land lay deluged by the Moon;
The molten silver of the lake
Shimmered in many a broad lagoon
Between grey isles, whose copse and brake
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Mathilde Blind
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 September 2020

My heart was laid against your own, Against your heart, which seemed to be Mine own to all Eternity.....love is the mysterious impression feelings of a mind; sometimes this love expresses itself for the unknown almighty power and sometimes for the ephemeral existence. the poem greatly crafted this poem; delightful to read

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De-Anna 13 September 2020

I love the eloquence and symbolism of this poem. I have read a lot of poems, including the classics, and this is up there with the best of them.

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Andrew Blakemore 13 September 2020

Really beautiful imagery

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Panagiota Romios 13 September 2020

Congratulations..such Imagery and soul Panagiota Romios

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L MILTON HANKINS 13 September 2020

This is an incredibly moving poem, expressively written. I do not know of a love poem that is so sincerely moving.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 September 2020

Nice raunchy one. She said without saying it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2019

like a child who trusts in God When in the dark it lies alone, Stretched on the aromatic sod My heart was laid against your own, a very good poem. radiant flame of love and the child's innocence. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2019

Lost in that radiant flame above As we were lapped and lost in love.......much impressive. Beautiful poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 September 2019

Beautiful poem. Very nicely crafted and with a sweet flow and rhyming. Enjoyed thoroughly.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2019

Lost in that radiant flame above! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Stephen Robert The Jar Sutton 13 September 2019

VERY WELL WRITTEN AND VERY IMAGINATIVE

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Uche Nwanze 13 September 2019

Fascinating and brilliant piece. A touch of class.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 September 2019

A lovely piece on 'the land deluged by Moon', and a wonderful expression this.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 13 January 2017

Mine own to all eternity. The theme of immortality of art and nature is highlighted in this poem. The poem romanticizes nature in all its form and ramification. Sylva-Onyema Uba

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 January 2017

The human attachment to nature is ever highlighted in this poem and likes.

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Rajnish Manga 13 January 2017

A wonderful poem celebrating the romance of nature washed in moonlight everywhere. Thanks. THE land lay deluged by the Moon; The molten silver of the lake

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Tom Allport 13 January 2017

beauty seen in a different light is still beautiful especially at night.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 January 2017

Well-written....++++++++ Thanks for sharing++++++++++++

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Ramesh T A 13 January 2017

Moon light sines bright as white light in the nighty sky for the lonely and desolate child as a far better wonderful company than anyone in the world!

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