THE land lay deluged by the Moon;
The molten silver of the lake
Shimmered in many a broad lagoon
Between grey isles, whose copse and brake
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I love the eloquence and symbolism of this poem. I have read a lot of poems, including the classics, and this is up there with the best of them.
Congratulations..such Imagery and soul Panagiota Romios
This is an incredibly moving poem, expressively written. I do not know of a love poem that is so sincerely moving.
like a child who trusts in God When in the dark it lies alone, Stretched on the aromatic sod My heart was laid against your own, a very good poem. radiant flame of love and the child's innocence. tony
Lost in that radiant flame above As we were lapped and lost in love.......much impressive. Beautiful poem.
Beautiful poem. Very nicely crafted and with a sweet flow and rhyming. Enjoyed thoroughly.
Lost in that radiant flame above! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A lovely piece on 'the land deluged by Moon', and a wonderful expression this.
Mine own to all eternity. The theme of immortality of art and nature is highlighted in this poem. The poem romanticizes nature in all its form and ramification. Sylva-Onyema Uba
The human attachment to nature is ever highlighted in this poem and likes.
A wonderful poem celebrating the romance of nature washed in moonlight everywhere. Thanks. THE land lay deluged by the Moon; The molten silver of the lake
beauty seen in a different light is still beautiful especially at night.
Well-written....++++++++ Thanks for sharing++++++++++++
Moon light sines bright as white light in the nighty sky for the lonely and desolate child as a far better wonderful company than anyone in the world!
My heart was laid against your own, Against your heart, which seemed to be Mine own to all Eternity.....love is the mysterious impression feelings of a mind; sometimes this love expresses itself for the unknown almighty power and sometimes for the ephemeral existence. the poem greatly crafted this poem; delightful to read