Thursday, April 28, 2011

A White Horse Comments

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In my dream I see a beautiful white horse running wild in the farmes Field
And alsi the day was warm and beutiful
But the coor of the sky was orangr and purple early in the morning
by the evening the sky got cloudy and then the rain came down fast
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Aldo Kraas
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Colleen Courtney 25 June 2014

Although many many spelling errors, the poem itself is beautifully worded. The scene you've described creates such a vivid and beautiful picture. Well done!

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