A White Horse Of The Most Magical Kind Comments

Stunning scenes David, and the ending was a real surprise, I think you'd be good at writing stories as well Love duncan X

Hi David! ! I love it! Brilliant poem, thought provoking a real pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

Rhythmic writing and a lovely fantasy type poem. A very enjoyable read and I loved the imagery. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

I found as if.......I could identify myself with this write of yours..... Yes...so true....We who live real life with restrain and decorum do have a wild streak...that finds an outlet in poetry........