A White Flame Comments

I thought the white flame would be love, so I was surprised to see hope. In a good way. Good job.

Fantastic flame my friend. Without hope we die even before our death. Keep on writing.

Hi Ivette Angel - This is a lovely poem with a lovely theme - A White Flame of Hope. V 1 & 2. It is great to have a flame of love and compassion burning inside you, V 3 & 4 It is not just any Flame - Ivette - It is your own personal flame a HEALING FLAME that can heal a broken heart and take away all your pain and agony - it is a cleansing flame. V 5 I am glad you feel the Flame and (V 6) feel that - like an Olympic Torch - it can be passed from Soul to Soul and Generation to Generation. V 7 'I can feel a white Flame of Hope' - AWESOME. I score it TEN. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN X

nice theme! nice presentation!