A White Fall. Comments

So enjoyed your poem as I too when young had to make my mark in the new blanket of snow. :)

Fantastic images bringing fantastic memories Fay,10+++ Tom

Ah a new snow fall so beautiful but here in Indiana we have ever so much.This is a very nostalgic poem very delightful a 10

Very enjoyable journey back to childhood's winter joys. Hold on a second, I'll get my sled.

Reminds me of dylan thomas beautiful meteafors and really reminded me of winters past jim

Evocative, nostalgic and thoroughly worthwhile reading. A white, sparkling poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

lovely written poem...i enjoyed reading this piece...Thanks! 10

I love the nostalgia it captures.

This is lovely and fun. Hey, why stop at having a second childhood? I think we're entitled to a couple dozen at least,

another beautiful write....i never have an experience with snow but while reading this marvellous write i alomst felt how it would feels....beautyful, beautiful....thanks 10+++ rgds asif

The joy of the beauty of snowfall runs all through this poem. Well penned. 10+++++++ CP

Beautifully described Fay....snow does have that effect on me too lol...thank you...Fi..10+

Enjoy it friend does not last long in sunny Cornwall 10 ++++ Chris

Yes! I can taste the snow from this. Have you ever taken a snowbath? If not PLEASE do! It is fantastic. You need no clothes and about two minutes of resolve. Your usual great writing. Best Hx

Thanks for the lovely imagery you have given me...wish to feel the snow...10/10

Now I prefer to watch the snow from indoors! Lovely poem Fay, the snow looks beautiful, 10 Lynda xxx