Thursday, September 14, 2006

A Whispered Rant In Disguise Comments

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If the definition of poetry is
that it touches the heart
then the Olympic Games,
all the arts
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Michael Shepherd
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... and hopefully all participants. A whispered rant, indeed... (I ask myself, M, would you do it any other way than so eloquently and elegently?) - I do go along with the sentiment. Though sometimes the more direct approach 'judge not and ye will not be judged' has its place....? - the fine craftsmanship of the piece goes without saying, of course. t x

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Joseph Daly 14 September 2006

Lovely poem Mike. I don't go along with the sentiment - winning is what counts as far as I'm concerned, otherwise, what's the point? The manner in wich you have expressed it is great. I read it a few times and enjoyed it more with each rereading. A humane subject written humanely.

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