Wednesday, July 19, 2006

A Whisper Of Sunshine Comments

Rating: 4.9

We drink the evening in a frosted glass.
Nothing about the music is profane.
Your eyes hold all emotion very quiet.
Fey Shadows stretch landscapes beyond belief.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2022

It's a meaningful poem dear Sandra. Loved the beauty of poetic expression. Top score! !

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Eyan Desir 04 December 2009

Very soft Well written piece

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 May 2009

Wonderful title, awesome write..a legacy left in your name this is - vivid images throughout, and then that wonderful final line, Brilliant....Cindy

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Maria C. Pires Costa 19 August 2008

Music, Soul, Nature, sacred Thoughts are always present in your poetry, Sandra.And how beautifully you can interact with them all! If you allow me, I'll highlight this line: 'Your eyes hold all emotion very quiet.' I think this is what's always happening with you. Love, Maria

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Theresa Moore 14 March 2008

A beautiful poem filled with wonderful images and heart felt emotion.10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 February 2008

i simply love this poem as when burn brilliant even no word from me would suffice for its dazzling grace, as if hanging like a moon on hill top, great write yet to follow,10+, thanks for sharing

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Bill Grace 22 September 2007

So often I am touched by things I do not understand. Perhaps it is because I am always in a hurry. The last four lines of this poem bring moisture to my eye and it is ok and well with my soul. Blessings always, Bill Grace

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Edna Javelosa 23 June 2007

every line is so romantic and captivating..i loved the way you explore things in poetry..

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Lisa Wilkinson 12 April 2007

Oh Sandra anything to do with the sky, sun, moon, rainbows gets a vote from me. Great expression and calm sentiment here, thanks for sharing.

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Melvina Germain 26 March 2007

I love reading your poetry Sandra, it's a learning experience. I wish I had a teacher as gifted as you, I would spend much time in class. This poem is not only beautiful, but it takes you in, makes you a part of it and gives a feel of serenity. I love it---Melvina---

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Lisa Wilkinson 10 March 2007

Very tranquil poem Sandra, well done.

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Jim Foulk 07 February 2007

a wonderful write, well said.

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Melvina Germain 02 January 2007

Your words submit an imagry of beauty, well penned in this most eloquent poem. Thankyou Sandra---Melvina---

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David Tanguay 23 December 2006

Sandra, your poetry is in a class in which I am not accustomed to reading. However after reading your work several times and discovering your true feelings coming through, it all unfolds so beautifully. It’s well worth the effort, you are truly gifted.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 31 August 2006

A gentle classic. A whisper of sunshine behind the hill Keeps back a little winter for the soul. As does this poem. I would say the art at its finest! Patrick xx

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Gregory Gunn 05 August 2006

A majestic masterpiece; perhaps your finest poetic undertaking. Ethereal images throughout, building steadily to that wonderful final line. Judging by the readership, well-received and deservedly so.

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Robert Howard 01 August 2006

Sandra, A gracious treatment of the mood of sunset. Delicate and wistful images.

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Ivy Christou 31 July 2006

your poetry is like an expensive perfume Sandra, you post few masterpieces each time but the poetic atmosphere created around them does not fade away easily.. well done for this stunning poem! HBH

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Catastrophe King 30 July 2006

100/10......... of course! This is a wonderfully designed piece. VERY GOOD WORK.

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Robert Howard 27 July 2006

Your language is like gentle breeze that brings comfort, ]

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