A Whisper Away. Comments

a structure unique to you...and the thought in this poem is excellent...he is omnipresent....10

a sweet kind with powerful thought..

i like the way you play with the structure.. i loved the wording too.

At first I thought endorphins. Then it dawned on me, a rather brilliant poem. Hxx

Fear not! dear Fay, for i will always guide you, in life or death i will prevail go forth where you your heart dost bide you! for where your heart, i am avail my sword dos't strike thy meanest foe, whilst i you worship head to toe! my life i lay before your feet, lest blood be spent upon the street

Impressive structure....and i think you know how obsessively meticulous i am with the aesthetics of my structural work(Right margin alignment) sometimes almost to the point of uncosciously compromising metre for looks, before i realize it, and then attempt to achieve both, or something close. I mention this, as you have indeed achieved both here, Fay. Al attractive, eye-pleasing structure...and an even-flow movement like silk on satin! FjR