Wednesday, October 22, 2008

A Whisper Comments

Rating: 3.7

Have you ever been sitting alone, and heard someone whisper your name?
you look around, there’s no one there, no one you can blame.
You question whether you heard it, there’s no reason you can find,
You just think you’re maybe tired, tricks of the mind.
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lindsey ashton
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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

Don’t be afraid of your spiritual guide, they’re here to help us through, Rachel Ann Butler

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Tsira Goge 24 October 2008

Your angel to show she never leaves you, your loved ones to show they care. ............................................................................................................. Well conceived poems, and moderately philosophic... Also I agree with Howard, you have fine rhymes and versification...10... best wishes, Tsira

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Howard Johnson 24 October 2008

Enjoyed reading this piece, excellent rhyming words.thank you for posting, Lindsey

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Billy Joe Collins 22 October 2008

we all need our angel's help from time to time very nice poem

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lindsey ashton

lindsey ashton

wigan, manchester UK
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